Reflection (Mom, Virginia Quines) 1. What piece of writing did you like best in my portfolio and why? I liked your querencia essay because it was very informative, flawy, and visual 2. What did you like about my portfolio and sharing and what would you like to see me improve on? I think you need to edit more on your chunky paragraphs it gets very boring when its repeated and reread some of your sentences to make sure it makes sense and clear. 3. Which of the writing traits (ideas, organization, voice, word choice) do you feel was most successful for me? Word choice because I liked how you described the food in roots & recipes. It was visual and the description was dead on 4. Which of the traits of writing would you like me to improve on in the coming semester? Ideas because your ideas need be written clearer and more personal.
Reflection (Mom, Virginia Quines)
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I liked your querencia essay because it was very informative, flawy, and visual
2. What did you like about my portfolio and sharing and what would you like to see me improve on?
I think you need to edit more on your chunky paragraphs it gets very boring when its repeated and reread some of your sentences to make sure it makes sense and clear.
3. Which of the writing traits (ideas, organization, voice, word choice) do you feel was most successful for me?
Word choice because I liked how you described the food in roots & recipes. It was visual and the description was dead on
4. Which of the traits of writing would you like me to improve on in the coming semester?
Ideas because your ideas need be written clearer and more personal.