Sunday, April 19, 2015

Macbeth Rough Draft

     People have a natural tendency to want things. It starts when we're born and just follows us through life. It doesn't matter what it is, if it's something better than what we already have or something we don't have, we want it. In the play, Macbeth by William Shakespeare, it talks about how the things we want can control us. In the story, Macbeth is destined to be king by prophecy. Once he hears about the prophecy, he begins to want the crown. In order to get what he wants, he's forced to do things he never thought he would have to do. As the story goes on, the things Macbeth has done begins to make him paranoid, thinking that someone knows his secret. All these suspicions forces Macbeth to keep doing bad things to keep his crown. In the end, he got caught for all he's done and loses his crown. In the play, Macbeth by William Shakespeare, it teaches us that our temptations can lead us to do the wrong things even if it goes against our morals.      
     Macbeth didn't always want to be king, it wasn't until he heard of a prophecy that he began to go after the crown. He didn't act alone, his wife, Lady Macbeth played a big part in their scheme to ascend the thrown. In order to reach their goal, they needed to get rid of King Duncan. At first Macbeth was very hesitant, "First, I am his kinsmen and his loyal subject, / both strong persuasions against the deed. Then I am his host, / who should lock the door against his murderer / rather than carry the knife myself" (1, 7, 13-16). He didn't feel its was right to kill an innocent person, nobody does. King Duncan trusted him and believed that he was a noble soldier. He couldn't even think about ever doing a such inhumane thing all for a crown, but Lady Macbeth wanted that crown so much she kept pushing him to do it. "Do you wish to possess the thing / that you value most highly in life (i.e., the crown) / and yet to live like a coward in your own judgment," (1, 7, 41-43). The pressure of someone telling you what to do and calling you names is hard to fight. He never wanted to be King in the first place but somehow he You don't want to be called a coward or weak so you do what they say, which is what Macbeth did. He gave into the temptation and killed the King. Lady Macbeth wanted the crown and Macbeth wanted to give to her, but now the weight of the King's death is on Macbeth's shoulders. 
     After the King is dead, Macbeth becomes more hungry for the crown but also more paranoid that people know his secret. His best friend, Banquo becomes suspicious of him. Macbeth becomes even more paranoid. "To be king is nothing, unless one is safely king. / My fears about Banquo is deep-rooted. / There is something kingly in his nature / which is threatening to me," (3, 1, 48- 51) The feeling of someone going after the same thing you want just makes you want it even more. You want to get the prize and beat them too. Macbeth feels that against Banquo that he decides to kill him to take him out of the running to be king. " I will tell you privately of a plot, / which carried out will destroy your enemy / and make you very dear to me, / whose peace of mind remains uncertain while Banquo lives, / but would become perfect if he were dead." (3, 1, 104-108). All for a crown, he decides again to kill someone to get ahead. Now that it's getting within reach, Macbeth isn't stoppingg until he can get his crown. 
     Everything is almost in line for Macbeth to become King, but when he hears that Macduff was in his way, he once again decides to kill more. Killing Macduff's family forcing Macduff to escape to England for help. Macbeth finally ascends the thrown but with a paranoid and guilty conscious. Macduff find Malcolm, Duncan's son, who helps take on the duty to take Macbeth down in battle. Macbeth hears about it and becomes instantly worried. " I have lived long enough. My life-style / has been transformed into a shriveled and faded leaf," ( 5, 8, 22-23) He realizes after all that he's done to get the crown, it hasn't done anything good to him. All that we risk for something we want has no meaning if it makes us a bad person. The guilt even consumed Lady Macbeth to a point where she couldn't even handle it so she decides to kill herself to take it all away. By himself, Macbeth is now faced with Macduff and he loses the battle. He loses his crown and life leaving Malcolm, the rightful heir, the throne. "Life is a tale / told by an idiot, full of noise and rage, / but meaning nothing." (5, 5, 26-28) Macbeth toward the end of his life became more and more mad. He finally got what he wanted, the crown,  but never got the happiness of being a king. 
     The play Macbeth shows how our temptations get the worst of us. It can control us to do wrong things to get what we want. All Macbeth wanted was to be king and to have power, which he got, but through it all he was paranoid and unhappy with all that was going on. He had to commit murder after murder to even come close to the crown. Lady Macbeth also want the crown but it all just became too much for her to handle. In the end, they both end up not happy with their lives. What they wanted took control and they did things they never thought they would. Wanting things is a habit. We we're told to wish for our dreams and to go after what we want, but there are always obstacles to get there. We should always go and get what we want but we shouldn't do wrong things to get it. If we start doing wrong things to get what we want, all we'll end up with is a corrupted world.

1 comment:

  1. Since we have gone over what to fix in your intro then I dont need to discuss that. My only other comments is that make sure discussion in body sections are continuously connecting back to the theme. Try to hold a more in depth analytic discussion. The lasting ideas in the conclusion I think can be developed a bit more as well. MS(3+)

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